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Why Prologues and Adverbs Get a Bum Rap

The prologue, like the humble adverb, is a despised thing among writers so I’ve learned.  So much so that, if you can believe the rhetoric, a manuscript of 90,000 words daring to contain one adverb is in danger of being denounced as rubbish and cast aside by agents – its author pooh-poohed as an amateur.  Likewise, the mere suggestion of inserting a prologue at the beginning of a tale is met with audible gasps of horror from those desperate to appear “in the know.”

Here’s the best thing about being a novice writer.  I don’t claim to know anything about this business.  I’m learning as I go.  That means I get to ask all the questions I want without fear of reprimand from fellow writers.  And to be honest, now that I’m on the other side of 40, I don’t really care what anyone thinks of me anyway.  I’m “over it.”  Thank God.

Here’s my theory:  there’s nothing wrong with prologues and adverbs.  The problem is that authors, who have not mastered the craft of storytelling, have used them as crutches to prop up otherwise weak writing.  It’s gotten to the point where readers (or maybe just agents and writing teachers) are sick to death of them.

It’s easy to see the effect of adverb abuse.  For example, “Luka uncomplicatedly adored his older brother,” (Luka and the Fire of Life by Salman Rushdie) is a ridiculous phrase.  It doesn’t give the reader a visceral (or even interesting) experience of the relationship between Luka and his brother.  What’s worse, it takes the focus away from the story and onto the language.  In a truly well written novel, the reader isn’t even aware of the author or the language.  He’s absorbed by the story – everything else is invisible.  This book on the other hand, is a painful read.  It’s riddled with bizarre adverbs and other crimes against the English language.  It breaks about a dozen rules for story writing, and it shows.

The prologue issue is a little harder to break down.  I’m guessing it stems from the modern story arc where the inciting incident shows up in chapter one.  (For more information on the traditional v. modern story structure, click here.)  Writers used to have four or five chapters to introduce characters and establish the setting.  Now we get a few thousand words.  The trick has become revealing character details and background information throughout the story in a believable way.  It’s called letting a story unfold naturally.

Trust me.  It’s hard.  Brutal, actually.

The first book in the Hunger Games trilogy (Suzanne Collins) is a brilliant example of this new approach to storytelling.  I suspect writers trained in the traditional story structure spazzed out when faced with having to put the inciting incident in chapter one.  They took what would have been the intro to their book, dumped it into a prologue, and called it a day.

Here’s a short video of Kristin Nelson (Nelson Literary Agency) explaining why prologues are not necessarily the best choice for an aspiring author.

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I still think prologues can work, but I’ve found a way to tell my story without one.  As for adverbs … you might find one or two.

Valerie Francis

The Mystery of Mrs. Christie

Well, you’re not going to believe this. Reece Witherspoon and I picked the same book for our February book clubs. Sort of.  Late last year, I came across THE MYSTERY OF MRS. CHRISTIE by Marie Benedict and was fascinated by the premise. Benedict writes historical fiction, much like Philippa Gregory,

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A Girl Named Howard

This month, rather than recommend one book to read, I’m recommending the entire body of work of one author because Anne Rice, who passed away December 11, 2021, single-handedly revolutionized the role of vampires in literature.  Yes, vampires.  And the impact she’s had is more significant than you might realize.

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The Christmas Bookshop

If you’ve had it up to your eyes with holiday preparations and are looking for a light-hearted story to escape into, The Christmas Bookshop, by Jenny Colgan, might be just the ticket. The title is a bit misleading, in my opinion. Yes, there’s a bookstore. Yes, the plot unfolds in

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