I think the filmmakers had good intentions when they made SHIRLEY, unfortunately, they failed to stick to the essentials of storytelling. In this episode, Melanie does a fantastic job of illustrating what happens to a story when writers fail to create obstacles that progressively complicate the plot. (Progressive Complications are a big deal – you’re going to want to pay attention to this one.) And I do a deep dive into the core event (aka the climax) and explain why it doesn’t work and how you can avoid making the same mistake in your novel. -V.
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Writing is an intricate dance of storytelling, where the core event serves as the climactic moment that leaves readers breathless. In the latest episode of the Story Nerd Podcast, hosts Melanie Hill and Valerie Francis delve deep into the storytelling principles that can elevate any narrative. They focus on the 2020 film “Shirley,” directed by John Ridley, using it as a case study to explore the significance of the core event in a story. The core event is not just a plot point; it’s the moment of highest tension and stakes, the culmination of the narrative that readers or viewers eagerly anticipate. As Valerie explains, if the climax fails to deliver, the entire story risks fizzling out, leaving audiences feeling unsatisfied. This episode emphasizes the importance of respecting the reader’s time, as once spent, it cannot be regained. Listeners will learn how to identify their story’s core event and ensure it aligns with the genre they are writing in. For instance, in a performance story like “Shirley,” the audience expects to witness a significant performance, such as an election night. However, the film’s execution leaves much to be desired, as the climax is not only brief but lacks the cinematic tension that viewers crave. This disconnection between expectation and delivery serves as a cautionary tale for writers. Melanie and Valerie also discuss the role of character desires and how they can become muddled throughout a story. A clear object of desire is crucial for crafting effective progressive complications that challenge the protagonist. In “Shirley,” the narrative struggles to maintain clarity around the stakes involved, making it difficult for viewers to invest emotionally in the outcome. The hosts encourage writers to analyze their own stories, asking whether their core events meet the expectations of their genre. They stress the importance of specificity in storytelling, suggesting that focusing on a singular aspect of a character’s journey can lead to a more compelling narrative. This episode is packed with valuable insights for writers looking to sharpen their storytelling skills. By dissecting “Shirley,” Melanie and Valerie provide a framework for understanding how to construct a satisfying climax that resonates with readers. Whether you’re a seasoned author or just starting, this episode is a must-listen for anyone passionate about the craft of storytelling. Tune in and discover how to elevate your writing to new heights!